We began with a reading of Hebrews 12:1-2.
The
MSP was projected on the big screen and we started with page one and
proceeded to examine it line by line to make changes in wording that
seemed awkward, redundant or unnecessary. We got through page 5 and
decided we would each review it individually on our own and send Gary
any further proposed changes. These are to be done by 8/24.
He will then compile these and make the "final" product available for our review. We may or may not need another face to face meeting for this; the option was left open. The plan is to submit the MSP to the September meeting of council.
Diane will submit a note for Toni to put in her next weekly newsletter.
